Thursday, 6 October 2016

day 6- tantalising

I liked the look of a Looping poem on someone else's poetry blog....did not know that was the name of the form, until yesterday.

They walk along the promenade these young surfers
Surfers who love the waves
Waves to be met and mounted
Mounted with strength and abandon
Abandon the social proramming
Programming that will remove their vigour
Vigour that is so tantalising with unzipped wetsuits open to the waist
Waist that invites the touch and unzip
Unzip to the embrace of the post waves sunshine
Sunshine of the promenading youth.

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