Friday, 30 September 2016

Day 1- Time

Time wavering, waverly- waving goodbye to the moments- looking back- they speed away, looking forward I crash into the wave coming towards me.
Feather jump lightly over the moments, alight outside of Time...and I laugh

4 comments:

  1. This is very interesting. I like the repetitiveness, the alliteration, of "wavering, waverly--waving".

    Have a blessed weekend. :)

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  2. Thank you Suzanne - this is a new venture for me.
    Do you have a link to your poetry?

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  3. A light-hearted view of an immovable force. I enjoyed it!

    Cie from poetryofthenetherworld.blogspot.com

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  4. Hi Zannie , thanks for posting a comment on my first poem of this month.
    I like the seemingly lightheartedness within your poem giving a positive energy - well done.

    gramswisewords.blogspot.com

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